Chocolate Writing

Attempt 2 Before I even tasted the milk chocolate I was feeling excited. I love chocolate. My mouth started watering because I was thinking about the chocolate. When Mrs McGuinniety opened the wrapper I heard it crackle. The wrapper ripped open and the paper was crunching in her hands. It smells chocolaty. The smell is very good smell. It taste like milk chocolate. I love chocolate because It is very sweet.

I had to taste the chocolate. I had to writ about it.